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Into my system the substance go
My mind and soul shouted in anguish, "No!"
I was wrong to take this horrible choice
Instead, I should've searched for a voice

If I spoke to someone like me- a wretch
They might've helped me regain my respect
Now, I only see the loss of myself, my soul
And people shun me for being no longer whole
 
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creatingisbreathing Featured By Owner Edited Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist
can relate to this a lot, I think everyone did a wrong choice and lost themselves at some point. I really like the honesty of your poems :)
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Gin-Zura Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Student
Thank you kindly :nod:
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careyanne75 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow! great piece, I needed to read this tonight, thank you
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Gin-Zura Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student
Thanks, and you're welcome :)
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Vaprous Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Thank you for this piece :)
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Gin-Zura Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student
:)
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